fiolee: a shooting star pg2

hi people
I'll continue drawing this story for all the favs and comments that you gave me,
thank you really I was like °A°
when I see all the favs and the comments XD

and like I always say please tell me if there is any grammatical error and spelling, because my English bad T^T
and one more thing
what color you prefer for the marshall skin green or gray?

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